Children danced in the
streets, their shadows flickering in the firelight. Musicians struck
up a lively tune on their flutes, and someone began to sing. Soon the
whole square was a light with music and dancing. Paul tapped his foot
to the beat of the ancient song. Yes, he'd known this tune since he
was a child.
“The King is my
strength, my rock in troubled times.
My soul will sing his
deeds, and my heart will magnify.
Lifting up his body,
and laying down his sword,
He will rescue me from
danger, and pay the ransom for my life.”
Paul's
heart swelled with pride as he watched his daughter Lilith join the
dancers, her feet moving gracefully to the music. Her voice rose
above the other girls, and a light twinkled in her eyes. She was
watching someone. Paul followed her gaze to a group of young men. One
towheaded boy towered above the rest. Micah.
He
couldn't decide whether he should pull his daughter from the dancers
or confront the youth. Anger still raged inside Paul, even though he
knew the boy wasn't guilty. He'd been angry for so long, he didn't
know how to let it go. The King's hand on his arm forced him to break
away from his thoughts.
“Something
bothering you?” He squinted at Paul in the torch light.
“I
still don't trust that boy,” Paul mumbled.
The
King glanced at Micah with a frown. “He was your hired hand?”
Paul
nodded.
“It
seems he certainly is looking for trouble. Brave young man though. We
could certainly use young men like him in our ranks.” The King
cleared his throat and snapped his fingers, motioning to a man
nearby. “Barlow, bring the drinks.”
Paul
watched the man slip back into Ada's Tavern, soon returning with
others at his heels. They lugged ale barrels through the door into
the street. Ada herself followed the barrels, her eyes watchful
slits. When her gaze fell upon the King, she approached, a smile
stretching across her face. “We have food and drink for everyone,
just as you ordered, O King.” She gave a slight bow.
The
King beamed and leaned close, whispering something in her ear. Paul
tried to catch the words, but the music drowned them out. Finally,
the King leaned back, stepping close to a barrel. He pounded his fist
against its belly. When that wasn't enough, he snatched the dagger
from his belt and banged the barrel with the hilt. The crowd hushed,
and the musicians lowered their flutes.
The
King smiled. “Thank you, everyone, for coming. I know you've long
awaited this day. I only wish it could have come sooner, but now, let
us not dwell in the dark memories of the past, but rejoice in
present, for deliverance is at hand. Soon your crops will grow green
again and your homes rebuilt. No longer will raiders rob you of your
children, of your possessions, and of your joy. Come, let us
celebrate. Ada has provided food and drink for us all.”
With
one voice the crowd cheered, and the ale barrels were opened. Paul's
hear drummed in his chest. This wasn't right. The elder King had
always discouraged drink, and now his son was supporting it? The
picture was wrong, all wrong, as the King filled a mug himself. He
lifted it to Paul. “Come, general, wipe that sour frown of your
face.”
Paul
accepted the mug with sweaty fingers, before glancing back to where
his wife stood among the crowd, little Elaine on her hip. No, he
couldn't do this. He had to prove to his wife that he was a man, a
faithful father, but the King stood over him waiting. Paul lifted the
foamy liquid to his lips, but forced himself not to drink. The King,
however, seemed satisfied. He turned and filled another cup, this
time giving it to Carlos.
All at
once the music began again, but all the more lively. Now the people
sang of summer, of green crops, and of life. The girls began to dance
again, their steps faster. The scene only disturbed Paul. To his
relief, Lilith had slipped away and was standing with her Mother.
Paul
continued his charade, lifting his mug to his lips whenever he
believed the King was watching him. Lissa watched him too, her frown
deepening by the minute. Go home,
Paul tried to message through his eyes, but she looked away every
time their gazes met.
Now
what? Paul thought. Chaos would
ensue before long. Why, even children were gathering around the ale
barrels. Realization dawned on him as eyed the King and tavern
keeper. Neither of them drank nor ate, but served. And there, another
man, one who had ridden with the King earlier, wasn't drinking
either. In fact, most the men he'd seen with the King from the
beginning were apart from the crowd, laughing among themselves. And
they all had sheathed swords at their sides. All except for Carlos.
Paul
gripped his old friend's arm. “Does anything look suspicious to
you?” he whispered.
Carlos
lowered his mug and peered down at him. Paul saw, with relief, that
his friend's mug was still full. “Everything,” Carlos hissed.
“Everything looks wrong. From the ale barrels to the King himself.
I'm beginning to wonder if that scrawny brat did know what he was
talking about.”
Paul
nodded, although he wasn't sure he was ready to admit Micah was
right. “What are we going to do?”
Carlos
shook his head. “I don't have a clue. The whole town will be in a
drunken stupor before we know it.”
“Perfect
time for a raid,” Paul muttered. The men's eyes locked and silent
words passed between them.
“Get
your family out of here.” Carlos nudged Paul forward.
“What
about you?” Paul spun around.
His
friend's eyebrows furrowed, determined. “I'm going to find that
boy. See what else he knows.”
The men
parted, Paul splitting to the right, and Carlos to the left. It
didn't take long to locate Lissa, her disapproving frown sticking out
like a sore thumb among the party. Paul grabbed her hand. She jerked
away, glaring at the ale still in his hand. Paul let the mug slide to
the ground. It clinked against the gravel, and ale splashed onto his
boots. “Let's go home, Lissa.”
His
wife's eyes softened, and she nodded. “Lilith, gather the
children.”
Paul's
eldest daughter grasped Amos and Arnon's hands and scanned the crowd.
Her eyes widened. “Papa, I don't know where Ernan is!”
Frustration
balled Paul's hands into fists. Not again! That boy always had a way
of disappearing at the wrong time. “Go on home, Lissa, I'll find
him.”
Paul
weaved back through the crowd, his eyes scanning every child over
four feet tall. None had Ernan's face. Finally he made his way back
to the ale barrels. No. Rage shook through Paul's body, and like
lightening he split through the crowd and jerked his son to his feet.
Ernan's
eyes widened in surprise, and ale dribbled down his chin. “What's
wrong, Papa?” he asked innocently.
“You
know exactly what is wrong, young man!” Paul yanked the mug from
his son's grip and slammed it to the ground.
A funny
sound gurgled in Ernan's throat, and his eyes rolled into his head.
Then snapped back, fiery and green. An unearthly cackle shook it's
way out of the boy's chest.
No,
no, no. Paul let his son slump
back to the ground. “Someone, please, help!”
The
crowd only cackled in response, lifting their mugs to their faces.
Fear shivered up Paul's spine. He knew that sound. Yes, he'd heard it
the day the raiders burned the castle and dragged away the King. He'd
heard it the night he was robbed of his horse, the night his
neighbor's barn was ablaze, the nights he spent in the tavern. Wait.
The tavern? Paul shook his head. How was this all coming back to him
now? Visions of Ada filling his mug, whispering into his ear, him
stealing into the night, his fingers digging into the soil and
lifting an ebony box from the ground. Paul glanced at his
fingernails. Dirt was lodged deep beneath them, every single one of
them.
No,
no, no. It can't be! Paul
collapsed to his knees, pressing his hands over his ears. He had to
block out the laughter, block out the memories, block out the shame.
He'd given the sword to Ada, and Ada had given the sword to this
king, whoever he was. What a fool he was! The ale had been poisoned
all along. He had to tell Carlos, and warn the people, but oh, it was
too late. Paul glanced back at his son, sprawled on the street and
clawing at the ground. A sob caught in Paul's throat.
A hand
touched his shoulder, and he jerked his head up. The king stood above
him, a smug smile on his face. He extended a mug. “Need more ale,
my friend?”
Paul
knocked the king's hand away. Ale splattered the ground, but the
crowd didn't seem to notice. Paul glared at the king. “I don't want
your drink, and I don't want your party. You are not
my friend, and you are definitely not my king.”
The
king's eyes narrowed. “Ada, I think my general needs a stronger
drink.”
The
woman appeared at his side, a large mug in hand. She leered at Paul,
and then cackled. “You fool. No one refuses my drink.”
Paul
jumped to his feet, intending to run, but the sound of metal scraping
metal froze him in his tracks. The king thrust a smoking black blade
under is chin. Curling up from the sword, the smoke drifted into
Paul's face, stinging is eyes. Paul trembled. When had the king
retrieved the sword?
“You
will drink,” the king spat in his face. Two large hands forced
Paul's jaw open. He struggled against them, but the sword pricked his
skin, sending a searing pain through his neck. Paul found himself
paralyzed and helpless. He couldn't move a single finger, bat a
single eyelid. Ada leered over him, pouring the foaming liquid into
his gaping mouth. The ale hit his throat, burning, tingling, urging
him to swallow. But Paul wouldn't. He couldn't. The king pricked him
again, this time deeper. Paul gasped in pain, choking down the ale.
The
hands released Paul, and the king stepped back, sheathing his sword.
Ada's hand fell, and she set the ale to the side. Paul's vision
blurred. A warm tingling filled his body, and the ground rocked. Paul
cradled his head. No, he couldn't let the ale take him.
“It's
really such a pity, Paul,” the king circled around him. “That the
smart ones like you are the ones I'll have to kill first. You were
useful for awhile, you know, but now, I don't think I need you
anymore. Now if you will cooperate...”
“N-never,”
Paul gasped.
The
king drew his sword. “You say that again I'll kill you on the
spot.”
Paul
drew back, attempting to avoid the curling smoke. The king stepped
closer, blade ready.
“Stop!”
a voice shouted. “In the name of the one true King, stop!” Micah
pushed through the crowd, Carlos at his tail.
The
king sneered, swinging his blade under the boy's nose. “I was
wondering when you would show up, Your Highness. Have you come to
save the day?” He playfully swiped at Micah's head. “Whoops, it
seems you've lost your sword.”
“The
King's sword cannot be lost.”
The
king rolled his eyes. “You know what I mean. Your guardian gave it
away. Now what are you going to do?”
Micah
held the king's stare. “Again, you have forgotten the law.”
Taking a deep breath, the boy stepped forward. He grasped the smoking
blade and tilted it toward his chest.
The
king gawked. Then he chuckled, an evil chuckle. “What good will a
sword be to you if you are dead?”
Micah
just blinked through the smoke, tears forming in his eyes.
“But
I must say,” the king continued, tracing an x across Micah's tunic
with the tip of his sword. “I would really enjoy seeing you dead.”
The king laughed, trailing his sword down one side of Micah's face.
The boy winced. Smiling, the king spoke in a hushed voice. “You
know, I won't allow you the privilege of a quick and easy death.”
Still,
Micah said nothing. A trail of blood trickled down his jaw line.
“Well,
okay, I suppose if you really want this.” The king turned away and
then spun around, whacking Micah's head with the pommel of sword. The
boy stumbled to the ground.
Carlos
rushed to his side, but the king swung at him. “Stay back, unless
you want to die now too.”
Paul
heard the king strike Micah again, harder this time. He winced
inwardly at the dull thud, but then he couldn't focus. The ground was
rocking again, and his eyelids felt so heavy. Paul groped in the
blackness, and finally, gave in.
<><><><>
“Paul.”
Hands shook his arms and splashed water on his face. “Paul, wake
up!
Paul
lifted his head, looking into the anxious face of his friend. Lissa
stood on his other side, grasping his hand.
“Where
am I? What's going on?”
Carlos
glanced at Lissa, then back at Paul and sighed. “Do you remember
anything that happened last night?”
“The-the
king. There was a party.”
“Yes,
yes, what else?”
“Ale,”
Paul murmured. “Lots of it.” His eyes widened. “Ernan? Is he
okay?”
Lissa
nodded. “He doesn't remember anything, except a party.”
Paul
jerked to sitting position. “Micah, what about Micah?”
Carlos'
eyes clouded. Pain crossed his face. “He's dead, Paul. Deader than
stone. That phony king beat him to a bloody pulp and slung his body
over the castle wall. He's taken up residence there. His men stalk
the streets, pillaging homes and robbing shops.”
“We
must gather men -” Paul attempted to stand. “- And force them
from the streets.”
Lissa
shook her head, tears welling in her eyes. “Paul, it's useless.
We've no weapons, and most our able bodied men were imprisoned during
their drunken stupor last night. Carlos has questioned neighbors and
friends. They remember nothing but the party, and then awakening to a
pillaged town.”
Paul
fell back, shock numbing his mind. “It's all my fault.” A sob
finally broke through his chest. “All my fault. If only I'd stayed
away from the tavern, if only I'd seen the king for who he was, if
only I had believed Micah.”
Lissa
squeezed his hand. “If only we all had the eyes to see and hearts
to believe.”
Together
they sat in silence for awhile, except for the children, whom Paul
could hear playing somewhere above him. “What is this place?”
Paul finally asked, wiping the tears from his face and studying the
dark walls around him.
“An
abandoned barn. We had to hide. The king is looking for us. He wants
us dead.” Carlos' words were bitter.
“But
why? We can't do anything to him, not when he has that sword.”
“That's
just it,” Carlos said. “He doesn't have the sword. The moment
Micah's breath left his body, the sword was rendered useless, a dull
and ordinary blade. The king cannot wield it.”
“Where
is the sword now?” A light dawned in Paul's head.
Carlos
reached his hand into a dusty pile of straw, withdrawing a silver
blade. Paul excepted it with trembling hands. “Why, it's not black
any more.” Dried blood still smeared the weapon, all the way down
to the hilt, but an unmistakable silver twinkled in dim light. “He
bought it back with his blood,” Paul whispered.
“What
do you mean?” Lissa leaned forward.
“Micah,”
Paul murmured. “He was the true King, and he bought the sword back
through his death.” Tears welled in his eyes again. “Lissa, I
turned the King of Kings out on the streets.”
“You
didn't know, Paul.”
“But
I did,” Paul sobbed. “I did. Every time he spoke, something
stirred deep within me, calling me to respect him, give him the honor
he was due, but Lissa, I hated him for it. My heart did not want to
recognize a quiet, awkward, towheaded youth as my king. I dreamed of
a warrior, an orator, a hero, not a servant.”
“So
did we, Paul.” Carlos squeezed his shoulder. “So did we.”
“...And
he saved my life,” Paul continued. “Despite what I did to him.”
His body trembled with sobs again. Lissa cradled her husband's head,
tears trickling down her own cheeks. Carlos stood not far off, his
shoulders slumped and head bowed.
<><><><>
Dawn
was just peeking over the horizon as Paul threw his last shovel of
dirt over the spot. He'd done this before, twenty-nine years ago, but
this time, he wasn't burying a sword. No, this time he was burying a
King. Carlos stood on the opposite side of the grave, his hand
resting on Lilith's shoulder. The girl swiped tears from her cheeks,
her eyes glistening in the early light.
Paul
had been afraid their night mission would be too much for her to
stomach, but the girl had insisted on coming, at least for the
burial. Paul wiped the sweat from his brow and reached for the burlap
sack at Carlos' feet. He withdrew the sword, still smeared in blood.
Overwhelming sorrow and gratefulness swelled in his chest. Taking a
deep breath, he gripped the hilt and drove the blade into the soil at
the foot of the grave.
Silent
words passed between the three, and they turned, disappearing into
the woods.
<><><><>
Paul,
his wife and children, and Carlos gathered around a meager meal of a
few tiny fish. They ate in silence, jumping at the sound of the wind
whipping around the barn walls. They couldn't continue to live like
this, fearing every second they'd be found. Paul wanted to move his
family farther away, but he didn't want to risk being spotted.
Rain
pounded the roof now, leaking in a few places. Thunder crashed, and
Elaine crawled into Paul's lap, burying her head into his chest.
“It's all right, dear. It's only a storm,” Paul reassured her.
But
then something banged against the door. Paul's heart drummed with
fear. He transferred Elaine to Lissa's lap and grabbed a pitchfork
from the wall. Carlos stood beside him, his hands balled into fists.
Another bang slammed the door. Whoever was out there was trying to
break in. Paul motioned for his family to hide, and he and Carlos
approached the door.
Swoosh.
The doors flew open, wind and raindrops ushering in a tattered
figure. Paul raised his weapon, and Lilith screamed. “Papa, don't!”
But Paul was already hurdling forward.
A flash
of white flew out of the stranger's tattered folds, knocking Paul to
the ground. Paul blinked a few times at the glowing sword pointed at
his face. His eyes trailed up the blade and up the arm, all the way
to the stranger's face. Paul blinked again. “Micah?”
The boy
lowered the sword. His face was marred and dirty, and his blonde hair
was matted with dry blood. But he had those gray eyes, the long nose,
the scrawny frame – he was undoubtedly Micah.
Paul
looked away, and trembling, bowed his face to the ground. “H-how?”
Micah
touched his shoulder. “Our enemy forgot another part of the law.”
Paul
jerked his head up. The boy was smiling. “The true King does not
stay dead.”
Of
course. Joy rippled through Paul's body, and his eyes filled with
tears. He grasped Micah's feet. “My King.”
Carlos
also still knelt on the ground, his eyes wide. Lilith flew past him,
her arms open wide. “Micah!”
The
King returned her embrace and then greeted the other children, his
eyes twinkling a new light.
“Tell
us a story!” Amos bounced around his feet.
“Yeah.”
Arnon tugged on his tattered tunic. “What happened to you?”
“Where
did you get that sword?” Ernan's eyes were saucers. He reached out
to touch the blade.
Lissa
swatted his hand away. “For goodness' sake, children! Leave him
alone. What he needs right now is good bath and a bed.”
The
King laughed, the noise lighting up the barn. “Maybe later, but
right now...” he glanced at Paul and Carlos. “It's time to see
what this sword can do.”
Paul
stood, grasping his pitchfork. “I'm ready. Let's go.”
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Thanks for reading, everyone, and I hope you enjoyed it! It didn't end exactly how I planned, but I think I still got my point across :)
I was riiiight. xD
ReplyDeleteThis is good. In spite of the fact that it was posted on the twenty-seventh, I only saw briefly that it had been published before I needed to get off the computer and wasn't able to actually read it until today. It was worth the wait.
I loved getting to know Paul and Carlos better (I now would like to see the two of them again sometime. I can definitely see a lot of potential story in the two of them working together and continuing the fight).
Something that I did notice was that when Micah entered the barn, it was somewhat similar to the Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King (the book, not the movie), when Legolas, Aragorn, and Gimli meet up with Mithrandir. Then, in the same scene, when the King said, "Our enemy forgot another part of the law" and the ensuing couple of lines reminded me of the Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, when Susan and Lucy met up with Aslan. I don't think it's a problem, but I thought I ought to point it out.
The writing was good, and I rather liked the way you ended it. It was a wonderful conclusion, and I really enjoyed the story. ^^
Thanks for pointing that out! I've never actually read the Lord of the Rings, so it's kind of funny that it's similar. Now the Narnia part, I must admit, I did consider how that was similar to Narnia, but at a loss for other ideas (probably why a person shouldn't write past 10pm at night), I used it. :)
DeleteI don't know if I'll ever get to writing a sequel, but I'll think about it. :)
DeleteI like the story Grace! I am a little confused though, are you telling us Micah is the King's brother?
ReplyDeleteI also thought maybe the king's character could use a little help. Could you somehow show us that he is untrustworthy rather than tell us. Some gesture that is out of place, a word, a look? What made Paul think not everything was right about him? He was suspicious before the party, but why? Just one look? Or was there some other subtle thing Paul didn't like? Do you understand what I am trying to get at?Don't tell us the king isn't worth trusting, show us.
I enjoyed the story and especially liked being left hanging at the end. :)
No, Micah is not the King's brother...That tale about an older brother was simply a cover up for why he had the sword.
DeleteAs for reasons to doubt the King is King... First off, Micah questioned him. What would the point of a suffering peasant boy be in confronting the King unless he really knew something was up? I mean, he was seriously risking his head. Also, the fact that Micah seemed to know more about the law than the King should raise another red flag.
The King having to go back and rephrase his words and explain things should also make you doubt his validity. For example, he claimed the sword was "stolen." Then when confronted by Micah, he covered up his blunder by saying he meant it had been given to another. Really "stolen" and "given to another" have nothing in common.
Perhaps I should have pointed this out a bit more.
I see. Maybe I would have understood the story better if I had read it all in one setting rather than spreading it out over several weeks. :)
DeleteYeah, it's easy to forget things with such a large time span between.
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