The King swooped down upon
him before he could make another move. Paul bowed low, fear trembling
his body. Now the King would strike him, imprison him, maybe even
hang him. He'd never believed Paul all along. The crowd held their
breaths in expectation. But nothing happened. Maybe the King was
waiting for him to speak?
“Your Majesty, I swear,
once again, I never opened the case or gave the sword to anyone. I
don't understand it in light of the ancient law, but I beg of you,
believe me. If there is anything I can do to prove -” Paul felt a
hand on his shoulder. He looked up to see the King, his brown eyes
twinkling.
“Oh, Paul, I never once
doubted you.”
“Y-you didn't? I mean,
you believe me?”
The King smiled, nodding
his bearded chin.
Paul collapsed in
disbelief. “Oh … I – b-but how?”
The King extended a hand
and pulled Paul to his feet. “The sword was never given to you,
Paul.”
“What?”
“The case was empty when
my father gave it to you.” The King's gaze swept the room now, his
voice raising to keep their attention. “Think, all of you. Why
would a king bestow the whole power of the kingdom upon a commoner he
had never met? He had no need to hide the sword from raiders who
couldn't steal it or wield it.”
“Then why give me the
case and key?”
“A test.” The King spun
around, mounting the stage. “Every King desires subjects he can
trust. Men he can appoint as rulers, advisers, counselors, and -”
He let his words hang for a minute and motioned for Paul to come
forward. “... and friends.” He put an arm around him. “Paul,
you have passed the test. I hereby appoint you chief officer and
general of my men.”
Paul's face turned crimson,
and he eyed the ground. “Your Majesty, I don't deserve...”
The King gripped his
shoulder. “Yes, you do.” His eyes had not yet lost its twinkle.
“This man,” he addressed the crowd again. “Since he was only a
boy, hid my father's key and sword, telling no one of it's
whereabouts. He himself never opened the case, respecting the man who
entrusted it to him. If he had, he would have known it was empty, and
when I faced him with the unknown fact, he didn't invent clever
stories to get himself out of the mess, but vowed to find it. Listen
and learn. Men like him are ones I desire in my court.”
The King removed the purple
cloak from around his neck and flung it around Paul's shoulders. The
crowd erupted into cheers. Paul's chest swelled with pride, but
something deep inside still urged him to speak up. When the noise
from people faded, he cleared his throat. “But your Majesty, how do
you have the sword? You said it was given to someone besides it's
rightful owner.”
“My older brother. My
father gave the sword to him, to reconquer our kingdom, but my
brother had evil intentions. A higher evil had been messing with his
mind, and he was tricked into passing the sword on to another, more
evil than he.”
“Then how did you get
it?” Carlos spoke up now, doubt underlying in his tone.
“Everyone has some good
in them. Repentance is not far off for most.”
Awe rippled through the
audience. Murmurs of, “Isn't he wonderful?” resounded through the
room.
Paul, too, was in awe as he
accompanied the King outdoors, the crowd following close behind him.
It was time for the meeting in the square. Already large numbers had
gathered around the central fountain, awaiting the King. Paul spotted
his family not far off. Lissa's eyes widened when she spotted him.
How would he explain this all to her? Surely she would believe him
now. Yes, all would be restored, including peace in his family. Yet,
as Paul took his stand beside the King, something tugged deep within
him again. Something wasn't right. Something wasn't adding up, but he
couldn't put his finger on it. The feeling was just there, sitting in
his gut. Shaking his head, Paul pushed all doubt to the side. For
now, it was time to rejoice.
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Sorry, this still isn't the last part, but I do plan to post it this week. Your feedback has been very helpful, and I finally found the inspiration I needed.
So tell me now, how do you feel about the King? What about Paul?
I think I like Paul better than I did, but in all honesty, I don't trust the king...
ReplyDeleteHooray for inspiration!
ReplyDeleteI'm definitely liking Paul. I think he makes an excellent character, and I'm looking forward to see what will happen to him.
As for the King... That _one comment_ that he made has made me decide he isn't the king at all. "'Think, all of you. Why would a king bestow the whole power of the kingdom upon a commoner he had never met? He had no need to hide the sword from raiders who couldn't steal it or wield it.'" I see that this post is tagged in "Allegorical," which definitely implies that the King in this story, would be THE King, and I'm not sure that's a comment that THE King would make.
And, that he mentioned "an older brother" whom the sword was given to. I'm thinking (of course, I might be way off here...) that the fellow going as the king here isn't the King, but is instead the older brother. My theory is that Micah is the real King.
Then again, I might be totally wrong.
I would tell you whether you are right or not, but that might ruin the next part :)
DeleteAn easy solution to that would be to post the next part now. :p Or tomorrow. Tomorrow works, too.
DeleteI'm almost done. Don't worry :)
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