Louise gasped and
lifted a shaking hand to part the chiffon curtains. A chestnut horse covered with mud wearily
made its way up the drive towards the house.
The rider on its back sat slumped, staring down at the ground. Fear made its way up her throat. Something was wrong. She ran as fast as her hoops would allow and
threw open the front door. The man
looked up as he reached the front of the house and tried to smile. Yet the sadness and tinge of fear on his face
made it look more like a contortion of pain.
“Ben..?” her voice trailed off and she walked out onto the large
porch. With a sigh he slung himself out
of the saddle and landed heavily on the ground.
His large boots clumped up the steps leaving globs of mud on the once
clean wood. He folded Louise into his
arms.
“It’s started
honey. The south fired on Fort Sumter.”
She pressed closer
to his chest and took in a shaky breath and closed her eyes tightly trying to
press back the tears. They poured down
her cheeks, refusing to stay checked, and dropped onto her husband’s jacket
where they disappeared into the already wet folds. “Come on, honey,” he gently guided her into
the house. The wind moaned softly as it
whipped around the house; seeming too also
mourn what had happened.
I think I am going to have to ban you from posting any other stories until you finish "Gone".
ReplyDeleteI think you did very well with your introduction/hook. You had me immediately wondering what was wrong! Great job! I have been waiting for you to post one of the Civil War ones you told me you had written.
I haven't even really worked on Gone anymore. But I will make it my goal to write some more it it this week.
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