The horse screamed as it pawed
the air in angry defiance. Another rope
flew through the air, attempting to settle itself around the horse’s neck. He saw it coming and leaped away in
fear. Men did not scare him. Their vehicles did not scare him. But he was wise to their ropes for, when they
landed around his neck, there was no escape.
Freedom was more precious than anything else. Life was not worth living
without it.
Another rope chased after him. He whirled and ran away, his breath coming in
short gasps. Oh, this pen! Outside of its enclosure, he would be able to
escape from these men, but here the strong plank fence barred every chance of
escape.
~
Robert wiped perspiration from his
face. The horse had dodged their roped for
at least half an hour. He was beginning
to wonder if they would ever be able to catch him. With a sigh he glanced at his watch, then
yelled to his companions, “Hey guys, let’s take a break. We can tackle this again later.” They quickly
left the paddock, sweaty, and breathing hard.
It was the first time that a horse had been able to avoid capture for
that long. Robert glanced back. The horse was trembling, not from fear, but
from frustrated longing, longing to be free.
Robert looked away quickly. It
made him feel sick in the pit of his stomach.
He remembered his first sight of the
stallion. While riding his horse, Flying
Stars, he stumbled across a small valley containing a sparkling, gurgling brook. Beside the brook a small herd of horses
grazed peacefully under the watchful eye of a fine black stallion. He had spotted Robert right away and while
sounding a warning neigh, plunged downward towards his herd. The lead mare had acted immediately by
rounding up the rest of the herd and heading them away from the supposed
danger. Robert, transfixed by the sight
of the muscular horse, was unable to urge his horse after them. When he finally shook himself awake, he
simply turned his horse’s head towards the ranch.
Unthinkingly, Robert had excitedly told his
employer, Mark Appleton, “You know that little valley out by Twin Forks? Well, a herd of horses have been hanging out
there. And the stallion, man, it’s a
beauty. Black. Big.
Wow.” He shook his head in
wonder. “I’ve never seen such a good
lookin horse.”
“So, you think he would be worth getting,”
his employer narrowed his eyes in thought.
“Then why don’t we go round him up; the herd too. There should be some descent horses among
them. We’ve needed some new horses
anyway.”
“Well, um, sure, if you want. I’ll go tell the boys.” He had walked outside wondering if he was
doing the right thing.
A few days later, the ranch hands had set
off after the stallion. They had laid
careful plans. They could not fail, and
within a few hours they had the stallion captive at the ranch. However, after a few days, Robert had begun
to worry. Since the time they had
brought him in, the horse had had a lost, hopeless look about him. Captivity might suit some horses, but not
this one. Taking freedom away from him
was like taking away his food and water.
He would eventually die. Maybe not physically, but the strong, wild
spirit in him would. He would just be an
empty shell of the horse he had been before.
Robert had seen it happen.
Robert shook the thoughts from his head as
he walked towards the bunkhouse. He
called over his shoulder, “We can try again tomorrow. Maybe he will be more cooperative.” He washed up, entered the ranch house, and
walked slowly down the hall. He was
beginning to lose his nerve, but he had to tell his boss the truth. Gulping, he straightened up, and walked
briskly towards his boss’s office. He
hesitated, then knocked. A gruff voice
called out, “Come in.”
As soon as he recognized Robert, his tone
softened. Mark and Robert had been
friends since high school, and Make valued Robert’s opinion on everything, even
if it contradicted his own. He waved
Robert to a chair, then leaned forward and asked, “How is the training of that
stallion coming along?”
Robert took a deep breath before he answered,
“Not good.” He hesitated. “Do you mind
if I am frank with you?”
Mark grinned, “You always are whether I
want you to be or not.”
“That’s for sure.” Robert chuckled. He paused, before continuing, “That horse out
there is a good one, but he’s not tame, not like Flying Stars or Jet. He won’t ever be like them. He’s too wild.”
“You mean he can’t be trained?”
“He can, but . . .” Robert sighed; it was
so hard to put into words. “His strength and beauty come from the wild spirit inside
him. The only way to train him would be
to break that spirit. We both know that
he wouldn’t be worth anything after that.
Not to us, not to anyone.”
“What are you suggesting?”
“Let him go,” Robert blurted.
Mark looked at him, his face
expressionless. For a long time he said
nothing. Finally, he stood up with a
sigh. “I know. I’ve known from the day I saw him.”
“Then why didn’t you . . .”
“Because I wanted him! When I saw him, I saw a masterpiece. I’ve always wanted a horse like that. I didn’t want to let him go.” Mark looked
away.
“You have to,” Robert said in a low voice.
Mark glanced at him, “You are the only one
that wants what is truly right for that horse.” He slowly walked towards the
elegant horse painting adorning the wall.
There was a long moment of silence.
Then Mark’s shoulders slumped forwards. “Let him go tomorrow morning.”
Robert
stood up. He wanted to say something,
but his mind was black. Turning, he left
the room. As he put the office behind
him, his steps became lighter. The horse
would soon be free. Free!
~
Robert woke up early the next morning. The sun was still hiding beyond the mountains
surrounding the ranch, but its glow was already lighting up the sky. Suddenly, beautiful colors of purple, pink,
and orange flooded out to form a spectacular sunrise. Robert paused, his face full of wonder. It was so beautiful!
After
staring at it for a moment, he forced himself to walk to the wild stallion’s
paddock. As he drew closer, he could see
the stallion watching the sunrise. The
horse suddenly whirled, his whole body tense.
He had spotted Robert and his ears flattened against his head. Robert murmured softly to him, walking the
final few steps to the gate. He took a
deep breath and threw it open.
~
The stallion huffed heavily as the door,
which had kept him prisoner for a week, creaked open. He took one hesitant step forward. The man was standing beside the gate, and
could easily close it. He took another
step, his eyes trained on the man. The
man stood stalk still. Energy surged
through the stallions veins. He was
still in the terrible enclosure, but nothing was going to stop him from
leaving. Not this man, not a rope, not
anything else they had. Tossing his
head, he trotted out, just out, and stopped.
He turned to the man.
~
Robert was amazed to find the horse looking
at him with thankful eyes! With a
gravelly voice he muttered, “Are you trying to thank me ol’ boy?” The stallion
stepped so close that Robert could feel his breath on his face. The horse nickered softly before he turned
and stared at the sunrise which was at the peak of its beauty. Shaking his head, he took a few steps towards
it.
~
The stallion gulped the morning air,
then leapt away from the man. Free! His hooves pounded the dirt as he galloped towards
the nearest hill. Reaching it, he turned
back and fixed his eyes on the man still standing by the open gate watching
him. The stallion reared upwards, his
hooves pawing at the sky above him.
~
Robert whistled long and low as the
stallion danced. Freedom. What a beautiful sight. The horse’s feet struck the ground and it
seemed to look his way before turning and galloping out of sight. Robert felt satisfaction deep within his
chest. The horse was free!
Perhaps not the most realistic story but still heart warming for those of us who love horses and have a soft spot for those few un-tamable wild ones.
ReplyDeleteYou have done better then this as you said. I think if you tried to combine some of your sentences a little more,(like you did for my Tiger Paw) it would help it.
Have I read this one before? It sounds like the one you wrote for writing class the same week I wrote The Quilt.
Nice Job. You did much better in showing the wildness of that general subject than I have in past tries!
One more thing though. A wild stallion wouldn't be much with out his heard...So maybe you are leaving it up to the readers to guess that he goes and steals a different stallions band? :)
Okay, thanks! You weren't suppose to notice that it was the same paper. :)
ReplyDeleteSweet story.
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