Sweat trickled down
the back of his neck sending a slight chill throughout his whole body.
Any movement he made could reveal his presence which would mean almost
certain death. The creature was coming closer, carelessly breaking twigs
as if wanting the whole world to know its location. Slowly he raised the
rarely used revolver while quietly sucking in a deep breath. This shot
had to be steady. It had to do the job. He closed one eye and aimed, slowly squeezing the trigger. The hammer clanked harmlessly against
a faulty primer. Fear filled him as he
yanked again. Still nothing
happened. Above
him he could hear the heavy breathing of the creature; its putrid breath
filled his nose. It stared down at him, a sneer on its
face. His heart dropped landing like a
rock in his stomach. “No! Nooo!” he turned to run but a hand grabbed
the back of his shirt, yanking him backwards, slamming him into the ground.
With the taste of dirt and blood in his
mouth he looked up to see its eyes glowing eerily as it looked him up and down
like a piece of meat. "Now it is your turn."
Ooh! Exciting. What comes next?
ReplyDeleteWell...um...I haven't written the next part yet...
ReplyDeleteI'm not quite sure I understand. Exciting though.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Grace...a little confusing! I think you lost me 3/4 of the way through! If I read part 2 it will help I'm sure!
ReplyDelete