I'm pretty sure I haven't posted this story yet (sorry if I have). It's not one I particularly care for as it doesn't have the best of endings. Or maybe it's the climax. Anyway, you'll understand if you read it. It is historical fiction, so maybe at least you'll learn something :) I would have posted something else, but the couple things I've started aren't finished yet (one is for Faith's challenge. I haven't forgotten!).
Thjodhild
stepped out of the longhouse and took in a long breath of clean,
crisp Iceland air. It was a beautiful summer morning, and the world
was rejoicing. The birds sang as they soared through the air. The
geese waddled up the road, and she could hear the moo of the cattle
grazing on the rugged countryside. Smoke arose from the cooking fires
of the neighboring farm houses. A sudden yank of Thjodhild's hair
brought her back from her wondering. Baby Thorvald cooed with
delight, his fists full of her hair. “You are an ornery little
boy,” she told the baby as she untangled the hair from out between
his fingers. “I wonder where your father and brother are.”
Just
then a dog barked, and Thjodhild heard her husband's booming laugh.
She saw him, little Leif, and the dog running behind them up the
road. Leif's little hand was enclosed in Eric's big one. He tried to
match his father's large stride while chattering nonstop the whole
time. Eric laughed again. His long, red hair was wind blown, and his
gray eyes twinkled as they met his wife's gaze. “Good morning, my
dear wife!” He gave her quick kiss on the lips and took the baby
from her arms.
“And
good morning to you, my mighty
man! Breakfast is ready. You better go eat it before I decide
to eat it all myself.” Thjodhild turned and went back through the
door.
“Well,
we wouldn't want that, now, would we?” Eric questioned Leif. The
boy frowned and shook his head. Eric chuckled and stepped inside,
Leif and the dog right at his heels.
“Master
Eric! Master Eric!” a loud cry interrupted the family's breakfast.
One of their thralls burst through the longhouse door, his face wild
with fear.
“What's
the matter?” Eric asked in a gruff voice, obviously disturbed by
his breakfast being rudely interrupted. “Well, are you going to
answer me or just stand there panting like a dog?”
“Eyjolf,”
the thrall panted out. “He just killed two of your thralls.”
“What
for!? What have I ever done to him?” Eric yelled. He slammed his
big fist down hard, hitting the table. Milk sloshed out of the cups,
and the dishes rattled. Frightened, the baby began to cry. Thjodhild
scooped Thorvald up and tried to comfort him. She loved her husband,
but this side of him frightened her, too. His anger often arose
unexpectedly, changing who he was completely. Eric stormed out of the
house angrily with the thrall following behind at a distance.
Obviously he was afraid of what his master might do.
Thjodhild cleaned up the dinner mess silently, hoping Eric would not
do anything too rash.
Eric did
not return until evening. His face was still flushed red with anger;
but he seemed a little calmer. Thjodhild handed him a cup of water,
hoping it would cool him off farther. He gulped it down but said
nothing. “What happened?” Thjodhild asked. She reached up and
touched his swollen eye. He flinched and pulled her hand back.
“A
couple of our thralls accidentally caused a landslide on Valthiof's
property. It crushed his house. Eyjolf, his cousin, killed our
thralls. He claimed they did it on purpose because of a fight they
had with a couple of Valthiof's thralls yesterday, so I got rid of
Eyjolf.” Eric seemed very pleased with himself. “...and a friend
of his.”
“Eric,
you didn't!” Thjodhild had just noticed the streak of blood on the
sleeve of his tunic. Her stomach churned.
“Yes,
I did. They won't bother us again.”
“But
Eyjolf's family will!” Thjodhild protested. “Your life is in
danger now and the lives of our whole family! What were you
thinking?” Loud pounding on the door interrupted her. Fear gripped
her heart. She could not get herself to move towards the door. If
only they could grab the children and run. The pounding continued,
and Eric opened the door. The village elders entered, somber
expressions upon their faces.
“What
do you want?” Eric asked.
“Eyjolf's
family has brought their case before us, and we have concluded that
you and your family should be banished for murder,” replied the
head elder. “You must be gone by tomorrow evening, or we will use
force.” The elders then turned and left.
Eric sat
down in front of the fire and did not say a word. Thjoldhild let her
tears flow. She knew he hurt, too, even if he refused to show it. Her
heart ached for him. They had spent six long, happy years building
this farm. It was Eric's pride, but now they would leave it behind.
A few
months later Thjoldhild stood in the frame of their soon to be new
home. “It will be finished soon,” said Eric as he came up behind
her. He put an arm around her waste, stood beside her, and examined
the longhouse. “Soon it will be just like back in Hawksdale.”
Thjoldhild tried to take comfort in Eric's words, but she new it was
not true. It would never be just like Hawksdale.
“Thjodhild,
I'm going to be gone for a few days,” Eric informed her.
“Where
are you going?” asked Thjoldhild, not wanting him to find any more
trouble.
“Since
I am almost finished with the house, I need to go retrieve those
beams I left with Thorgest.”
“Can't
you just make some new ones?”
“Thjoldhild,
those beams were my father's. They are symbols of Viking greatness
and authority. I will not go without them in my house.”
Thjoldhild
sighed. It was of no use to try to change his mind. He brushed her
blonde hair out of her face, gave her a kiss, and bid her good bye.
She silently watched her man leave. Would he ever give up his pride?
He still seemed to have no remorse over what he had done. Hopefully
Thorgest would return the beams willingly.
Eric
stood waiting with five of his thralls at the door of Thorgest's
longhouse. A slave girl opened the door. “Is there something you
need?” she questioned.
“Is
Thorgest here?” replied Eric. “I have some urgent business I need
to discuss with him.”
“Yes,
he is here. Come on in.” She ushered the
men through the door and led them to the table where Thorgest
was dining with his sons. Upon seeing Eric, Thorgest stood and
greeted him.
“Eric
Thorvaldson, it has been awhile. How are you doing, my friend? Come,
have a seat.” Thorgest scooted a chair towards him.
“I am
fine. Thank you,” replied Eric as he sat down. “I have come to
retrieve my posts that I left in your care awhile back.”
Thorgest
laughed. “I thought you told me I could keep them.”
“Only
until I could come back for them.”
“I am
sure that is not what you said. Besides, I have become quite fond of
the beams. I cannot return them.” Thorgest folded his arms across
his chest and stared coldly at Eric.
“You
will give them back!” argued Eric. His face began to flush red in
anger, and his eyes turned as cold as Thorgest's.
“No, I
will not.” Thorgest motioned to one of his slaves. “Show our
guests out.”
Eric
balled his hands up into fists. “We
will not leave without the posts.”
“Get
out of my house, Eric,” Thorgest said firmly. “or I will force
you out.”
Enraged,
Eric struck Thorgest on the jaw, knocking him out of his chair.
Thorgest's sons moved to protect their father, and Eric's thralls
stopped them. Eric reached for a knife from the table. Thorgest's
wife and children began to scream, and neighbors came running.
Eric sat
with his head in his hands, sobbing. How was he going to tell his
wife and children that he had been outlawed again? Why did he let his
anger control him? Why did he kill Thorgest's sons? Now where would
he go?
Thjoldhild
heard the dog bark. Her heart skipped a beat. Was Eric back? She
looked down the road and saw the thralls coming towards her. Seeing
their bruises and somber faces, she knew something was wrong.
Thjoldhild hurried towards them. “Where is Eric?” she asked. “Is
he all right?” The servants motioned back down the road a ways.
Eric sat at the foot of a tree, his head buried in his hands.
Relieved and overjoyed to see him, she ran as fast as her legs would
carry her. “Eric!” she called.
Upon
hearing her cry, Eric lifted up his head. Tears streaked his face.
Thjoldhild stopped in her tracks. She had never seen her husband cry
before. “What happened?” she asked. She stooped down and began to
wipe his face.
“I'm
sorry, Thjoldhild, I have failed you.”
“What
do you mean, Eric?”
“When
Thorgest would not return the beams, I killed his sons. I have been
outlawed.”
“Oh
Eric!” she sobbed.
“I've
learned my lesson. I'll never let my anger control me like that
again. I don't want to hurt you and our children more than I already
have. Please forgive me, Thjoldhild.”
Thjoldhild
took in a deep breath. She had longed to hear those words from her
man for a long time. Now tears ran down her face. Her husband meant
it, and she would help him in any way she could. She flung her arms
around him and just sobbed.
A few
hours later Thjoldhild held baby Thorvald in her arms, and Eric stood
beside her. Leif held his father's hand. They all watched the shore
as it shrunk away, the ocean becoming bigger. Their family was
starting anew, and soon they would find another place to call home.
Eric took his family to an unexplored land, which he dubbed
“Greenland.” There, other vikings joined him and started a
colony. Two more children were born to Eric and Thjoldhild, a son and
a daughter. Leif began to show great interest in the sea and
adventures. Maybe someday he would even discover a new land of his
own.
You did post this in July of 2013. But that's okay, I like the story!
ReplyDeleteBummer! I thought maybe I had, but I flipped back through the posts and couldn't find it. Oh, well. Maybe I'll post something else too.
DeleteDon't feel like you have to. Like I said, I like this story and don't mind getting a chance to read it again!
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