Tuesday, November 25, 2014

Don't Forget About L.A.R.K. Book Reviews!

I haven't had time for leisure reading or writing, but I have been doing a lot of reading and writing about books at college. If you are interested in what I've been reading, I decided I could post a few reviews on our book review blog. I only have one up right now but plan on adding more.

Blessings,

Grace

Monday, November 24, 2014

Inventors and The Uses of Their Inventions

Here is a short essay I had to write for school today. The topic was interesting but I had a surprisingly hard time coming up with data for it!





Inventors and the Uses of Their Inventions
Kelpie Fly
November 2014



Most of us humans are exceedingly proud of our accomplishments. The greater they are the more big headed we get. But what if our accomplishment had a massive negative impact on mankind? Let us look at two examples.

 1 In a letter to Lester Gardener  in August of 1946, Orville Wright wrote that he “once thought the aeroplane would end wars.”  He, as well as many others, assumed that flight would prove such a devastating ability wars would practically be ended before they started. Three years after receiving their official patent Wilber and Orville Wright tested their machine for the U.S. Army. Later the brothers even provided airplanes and trained pilots for WWI. They worked diligently for what they hoped would bring world peace. Those of us who were at that time still the future generation can read our history books and see this was not the case.

Close to the end of WWII, Orville’s peace bringing bird dropped a highly controversial and hugely  devastating capsule called “the atomic bomb”. 2 In the same letter that Wright spoke of his earlier optimism  he wrote, “I now wonder whether the aeroplane and the atomic bomb can do it [end wars].” The note of sorrow rings with a tinge of regret that his world changing invention did not bring about the calm he had imagined.

3There was another man who dreamed that his invention would put and end to wars. His name was Alfred Nobel. We know him best as the founder of the Nobel peace prize but with out studying much further we find a seeming contradiction. Nobel was the man who first concocted dynamite. Though this explosive was originally designed for blasting in mines we are not surprised to read history and find it quickly used for war. At first Nobel did not seem to mind this. In fact he told Austrian Countess Bertha von Sutter in 1891, 4 “Perhaps my factories will put an end to war sooner than your congresses; on the day that two army corps can mutually annihilate each other in a second, all civilized nations will surely recoil with horror and disband their troops.”

Alfred Nobel did not live to see WWI or to understand just how mistaken he was.

These two men were very gifted but did they make a mistake? I do not believe we can lay the blame of higher military (and civilian) casualties on these brilliant men who hoped to bring something the greater portion of the world also longs for, peace.  However, we can learn the lesson that they too must have realized: our actions can have uncontrollable repercussions. After all, “5With great power comes great responsibility.”
 

  1. www.nobelprize.org  5.  The movie Spiderman 



My writing book  said to use the last paragraph to sum up my point. I did not really have a point so this assignment was difficult. In the end I gave up and used the above but I do not care for it. Any ideas?



Saturday, November 8, 2014

The Beetle's Song



I'm in love. In love with the song of the heavens, the wind in the trees, and trickling of the brook. But most of all, I'm in love with Crescendo. His arms are smooth and strong. His hands thick and warm. But it's his song – yes, his song – that's most beautiful to me. It's ever growing in intensity, every note building upon the other, until it reaches a pinnacle of perfection you never though possible. Still it grows, weaving in, weaving out, till there's a thousand tender strands woven into his song. That's how it always builds until he touches me. When our hands are interwoven, his song stops altogether, like he's pausing for a breath, and I know he's listening to mine – he told me so.

Mine is like a war, he says. Like the clash of beda-beetles on the front lines. Like a chaotic 
cacophony of melodies colliding. I ask him, “Is it pretty?”

“I like it,” he says. “You've many thoughts a tumbling around in your head.”

“And that's a good thing?”

“Yes, it means you think.”

Yes, I do think. Too much Mama says. But my thoughts won't sit still even under the strongest meditation. It makes my beda-bug feisty. She buzzes and flits beside my ear, tickling every hair till I brush her away. She'd make a good battle bug, Papa insists, but I don't want to go to battle. I don't want to fight the Pain-Bringers. They don't have songs. You never know one is behind you until you hear a twig snap. Then it's too late. Pain shoots into your eyes, a place you never feel.

..........................

Beda thread her way through the wood, here ears attentive and alert. Lady buzzed past her right ear and led the way, flitting back and forth between the trees. 

Lady, wait! Beda's bare foot caught on something sharp, and she fell to the ground. Twigs crunched under her weight. Beda cradled her aching wound. 

Bzz-bzzzz! Lady landed on the girl's nose.

Beda swatted the beetle away. "Patience, girl!" she growled through clenched teeth.

Bzz-bzzz! We haven't got much time.

"I know, but I can't very well walk on a hurting foot." Beda's fingers slid across her foot, feeling for abrasions in the skin.

You will have to learn to fight with much more than a hurt foot in the war.

"I know, I don't want to think about it."

You will have to soon enough.

Beda sighed and pushed herself off the ground. She grimaced as pain shot up leg. 

Lady tickled here cheek. There you go. Hurry now. The Uncles and Aunts won't wait for you!

Right. Beda took a deep breath. "Lead on."

Lady buzzed on ahead of her, humming an all too familiar tune. The war will come, O children rise. Defend the Father's holy land. Let our notes reach high and true, perfect songs to break all doom.

Beda ignored the notes of the song and focused on the buzzing of Lady's wings.

"Beda." The girl felt an hand on her arm and squealed.

"Peace, Beda," the voice spoke again. "It's just me. Didn't you hear my song?"

"Crescendo." Beda exhaled. "I'm sorry, I was focused on Lady."

"You need to be more aware of your surroundings."

"I know, I was just in a hurry. Have the sessions started?"

"Yes, but your name has not been called yet. Come, let's go." Crescendo grabbed here arm, his beetle now leading the way. Beda leaned close to him, trying to calm her thudding heart. She felt the trees fade away and open air rushed her face. In the distance, she could hear a thousand songs intermingled in the town square.

"Something is wrong." Beda shivered as she interpreted the frantic notes of the music.

Her friend spoke in a hushed voice. "I think now they have called your name."

Lady zipped angrily around Beda's face. "I'm going, I'm going!" Beda sprinted for the square, grimacing again as pain shot up her foot.


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Well, this is a very rough draft of the beginning of a story I've been tossing around in my head for about a year now. What I want to do with this story is just a bit difficult. If you don't mind, I'd like a little feedback so I know whether I got a few things across clearly or not.

First, did you understand that these characters cannot see, but rather they rely on their beetles to tell them where to go?

Also, is it clear that each person has a unique song by which they communicate feelings and personality?

Do you want to read more?

Oh and my title has nothing to do with the old music group...I just haven't come up with a better title yet :)



Monday, October 13, 2014

Riddle

Sorry to any of you who have already read this post on my personal blog.

I have decided that the absolute best place to find inspiration is in a math book....staring at long lines of numbers, letters, and symbols never fails to make my mind wonder to other, more interesting, places.

This is a riddle I wrote a few days ago during, yes, a time when I should have been applying myself to M.A.T.H. (Mental Abuse To Humans). It doesn't rhyme and it's rather long but when I read it to my sister she really liked it so I decided to go ahead and share it with y'all.

What is always being made, is never changed, can be mended but not undone?
What speaks a warning that is frequently unheaded,
When it tells about something that should not be repeated?
What continues forever, but is stuck in time?


Can anyone tell me the answer?

Thursday, October 9, 2014

A Short Story

I've debated with myself for quite a while on whether or not to post this story.  I have been working hard recently on writing short stories. Truly, short stories. This was one of them, so for that reason I wanted to post it. But for the simple fact that it deals with a highly controversial issue, I didn't want to post it and risk finding myself in a heated debate. At last I have decided to go ahead. After all, I don't really draw any conclusions, I leave that up to the reader. So please if you don't agree with my point, or even if you do, keep in mind this blog is for writing, not debating. I would appreciate help with my story but I'm not looking to begin a dispute.



Dolice swung a leg out the door of his silver Toyota pickup, his right hand still groping around in the back of the cab. His ring finger grazed a piece of cold metal and his large hand quickly closed over it. He lifted the pistol into his lap and checked the chamber. Good, it was full. He didn't have much more time.

Both feet touched the ground as he sprang lightly out into the alley.  This was a typical little access, full of pot holes, crumpled garbage cans and shattered glass. Glancing over his shoulder, Dolice moved away leaving his door wide open. He'd want it that way for a quick escape.

His hands shook as he strode up the rusted fire escape stairs two or three steps at a time. It wasn't that he wanted to do this. He simply had no choice, there could be no surviving witnesses.  He gripped the gun more tightly, there was no time for even a sip to steady himself.

A dented metal door hesitantly lumbered open when he kicked it, letting barely enough light in to penetrate the cave-like darkness. Inside there were three forms, bound and gagged. He could barely make them out.

The clerk, the old man who had been in the alley the day it all happened, and the pawn shop owner. It wouldn't do to try holding them hostage. No, especially not here where he could be surrounded in minutes.

He raised the gun and lined up his sights on the first bundle. he could see the young man's terrified eyes above the gagged mouth. Somehow though, he was so tied he didn't really seem human. Dolice relaxed a little, this would be easier than he had thought. He pulled the trigger. One.

He shifted a little and pointed the short barrel and the next lump of rope. Two. And then again. There, that was three. Turning he fled from the smoke filled room. That part was done and over. Now to move on to the next piece of business. He clattered down the stairs.

                                                         ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Dr.Kordakov opened the door of his black sports car and swung a leg out. The crisp morning wind picked up stray pieces of his greying hair  and tossed them back and forth. His brown eyes glanced at the sign above his clinic.

"Headiesville Family Planning Services" On the door he could barely make out the paper he knew said, "We offer abortions." and another small white sticker on the one window which announced that he had a legal business permit.

He ducked back in his car and snatched his spotless lab coat. Just another day of work.



Alright, if you don't mind me asking, what was your conclusion? 
Did you see any connection between the two stories or were they totally unrelated scribbles I glued together? 
Do you have any ideas for a title?

Honestly I am not sure what to think of this story myself. It simply popped into my head one day while I was studying and I couldn't get it out. So I set aside my books, which I was not enjoying anyway, and wrote it down.

Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Recent Writings

Do you want to know what I have been writing recently? Business letters! Terrific...thankfully they are only for school and don't have to be mailed!

Some of them have actually been a little bit fun to write so I thought I might share a snippet or two.

My simple business letter was a serious one, written to the National Gardening Society. Nothing much interesting for you all so I won't share it.

The letter of complaint however I thought some readers might enjoy.






September 9, 2014


Pansy Publishing House
 Customer Service
123 Riddle Me Re
Tooname, SS 45678


Dear Sir or Madam:

I purchased the book, It’s a Joke at The Laughable Book Store here in Sumtoun on January the 3rd of this year.  I paid $12.00 for this hardback and expected to be able read the contents immediately.

However, when I had read the first chapter of the book, I discovered that the next page started chapter three. The second chapter was missing. After examining the book more closely I found that every other chapter is not in the book. The book is incomplete because it contains only the odd numbered chapters.

I am confident that you will honor the commitment to quality you state on your website and will either return the twelve dollars or send me a correct and complete copy. I have included the defective book and am requesting a refund for its shipping.

Thank you for your time.

Sincerely,


Kelpie Fly
345 Ladidah Rd.
Sumtoun, SS 67890

Wouldn't you want your money back?

Then there is my (fake) request for employment. It's not particularly humorous but I would appreciate some feed back on it. Someday I may have to write a genuine request.


September 10, 2014

Pope County Library System
116 East 3rd Street
 Faktoun, SS 10827

Dear Persun Iwunt,

I am a regular visitor to both the Faktoun Library and the Sumtoun Branch.  I enjoy not only your collection of books but also the assortment of movies, audio books, and CD’s. My nephews love story hour and my father has found the genealogical section to be very useful.

I myself am an avid reader and have, for many years, been loaning out (and tracking down) my own small collection of books. I am organized, prompt, a willing learner and a steady worker.

I would like to work at your library, part-time doing anything to help. I can re-shelf books, help file papers, work in the book store or help patrons locate books. I believe that I could ease the work load of the Pope County Library Staff as well as help users to discover a love for books.

I plan to call your office on Monday the 15th to request and interview. Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,

Kelpie Fly
 345 Ladidah Rd.

Sumtoun, SS 67890 

Want to hire me? I could be a big help...as well as drain on your pocket book!

Surprisingly these are not the only things I have been writing. I did start (and complete!) a short story last week that I hope to post soon but I am building suspense first. :) (The truth is that I wrote the story out by hand and haven't had the time to type it into the computer yet!) Also I hope to write a book review in the near future. Maybe this blog will look a little more lively again? No promises though.