First of all let me apologies for my lack of blog existence. Life was very busy for me until last Thursday afternoon which found myself on a gym floor with a white face and a fat ankle. Being on crutches necessarily slows down your life but, much to my delight, makes time for other things that are normally shoved aside. One of those things has been writing my part of the recent challenge hosted by Faith.
So, here was the idea I received, I believe I can thank Josie for the inspiration for this story. Josie, am I right?
So here is my first part of I'm Sorry, But I am Not
So, here was the idea I received, I believe I can thank Josie for the inspiration for this story. Josie, am I right?
One day,
while out riding his horse, practicing for a
rodeo, the rider (you can decide whether you want it to be a guy or
girl) is bucked off his horse and is knocked momentarily unconscious.
While
unconscious, the rider is kidnapped and shipped to a foreign country,
then
stranded on an island when the ship wrecks. The rider starts off
through
the jungle and is soon met by a band of natives, who start rejoicing
excitedly. They mistake the rider for the new missionary who is coming
to
help out at the newly established mission there. (The rider has the
same
name as the missionary).
When the mistake is found out, will the rider
go back and perform in the rodeo, or stay and help at the mission? And will he be able to find out what
happened to the real missionary?So here is my first part of I'm Sorry, But I am Not
As the black cloud slowly receded from Ian’s brain he began
to be aware of a gentle rocking movement and opening his eyes he looked
confusedly around. He was laying on his back and looking up at the large
supporting beams of a…what? He struggled into a sitting position, ignoring his
spinning head and tried desperately to focus on the flying objects in front of
him. Squeezing his eyes shut and then
opening them wide he finally made out several hammocks hanging around him on to
his immediate right a ladder which the bright sun was pouring down. He was in the
hull of a ship!
He stood up slowly and stiffly his spurs making a familiar
jingling sound as he began to stumble painfully towards the ladder. The
jingling turned into a loud buzzing noise.
Ian jerked wide awake, gasping for breath, as he felt his
body suddenly drenched in very cold water. He was lying at the bottom of the
ladder where he must have passed out as he began his ascent and scrambling to
his unsteady feet as he felt the ship tip on her leeward bow, another flood of
cold water poured down the open hatch and re-drenching him.
He grasped a wrung of the ladder and began to desperately
haul himself up; he must know what was going on. The last thing he could
remember he had been out in the Montana
flatlands practicing some of his trick riding for the upcoming rodeo.
He reached deck just as the ship tipped steeply to her stern
and he found himself sprawling across deck.
The wind was screaming through the mast heads and a freezing rain tore
mercilessly at his lightly clad body. His legs were warmer than the rest of
him, thanks to his cherished leather chaps but they were still soaking. The
ship dipped to her helm and he was soon sliding towards the side. His hands
scrabbled for something to hold onto and his voice croaked an appeal for help
but he went over the edge in a moment.
Ian fought with the raging waters as they tried to pull him
down. His beloved chaps were like led on his legs when he tried to kick and
sorrowfully he unbuckled them.
A mother wave stole up behind him and gently tucked him
under one arm a rocking him to sleep.
When Ian woke up again he found himself once more lying on
his back but this time he was quite familiar with the scene that met his eyes—blue
sky!
He breathed deeply and heard the wash of the ocean tide tenderly
caressing the beach. A large bird cast it shadow over him for a moment and then
lightly dropped near by. He lay still not caring for anything, but resting his
limbs, when a beak appeared over him and two beady eyes watched him
carnivorously.
“Earwaaah!” the vulture announced his find to his friends
riding air currents above.
Yep, you're right, Hope, this one is my idea. =P I really like what you have so far! =D
ReplyDeleteThank you Josie, that makes me feel better because I, personally didn't like how I was writing it! :)
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