Fifteen year-old Joy hates her life...and her
name. Her daily routine consists of the same “joyous” old tasks day after
day...eating, school, eating, chores, more eating, sleeping, and repeating. She
is convinced no one could ever have a more boring life. In her few and far
between prayers, she often complains, “God, why can't you just shake my life up
a little bit?” Joy doesn't think God actually hears her. Her prayers are just
wistful wishes whispered to the wind...but then God literally shakes her entire
world.
There was actually a bit more to this prompt. However, I had permission to leave it out if I wanted because it was so crazy. As you can probably guess, I decided to go ahead and do that. :)
Anyway, here is a little taste of the story. Hopefully I will get a much larger chunk of it up soon.
“Joy!”
Joy’s
green eyes shot upwards from the pages of the small diary she cradled in her
hands.
“I need
your help!” her mother’s voice was laced with irritation.
Dear Diary, the evil stepmother calls. I must go.
However, I will return quickly with more complaints.
Yours Truly,
The Girl with the Absolutely Most
Boring Life in the World
The green fur branches pulled
gently at her hair as she crawled out from beneath the safety of their
boughs.
“There you
are!” her mother stood not ten feet away, hands on her hips. “I should have guessed that is where you
would be. Could you come watch Susie
while I make dinner?”
The
question was really an order. There was
only one answer that would meet with approval.
“Sure.” I always watch Susie. Why can’t
Mark do it? Glowering she walked
past her mom and slammed the screen door as she entered the house.
At least
her mom hadn’t lectured her on how she, above all people, should act joyful
because her name was Joy. ”Who
cares? If I had been named Fly would
people expect me to fly?” Still
grumbling to herself she ducked the diary away in her room and went to find her
baby sister.
The moon
cast a beam of light through the window.
Besides that all was dark. Joy
pulled the covers up tightly beneath her chin.
Here in the quiet, within the confines of her mind, she could go through
all kinds of exciting adventures. However,
these moments of contentment did not change the fact that her life was
downright boring. Why me? Why does my life have to
be son uninteresting? God, why can’t you
just shake up my life a bit? Make
something happen out of the old routine?
She snorted. Did God exist? Maybe.
But if he did he didn’t care a bit about her or her prayers.
She tried
to plump up her flat pillow before closing her eyes.
Yes, it was a bit of a crazy idea...but I was hopeful.*sigh* Me and my overactive imagination...or maybe it's all those Bryan Davis books I read...Ok ok I'll quit lamenting. After all, I did give u permission to take it out.
ReplyDeleteVery good! I like it so far. Except now you've made me super curious. What are you going to do to shake up her world?
You'll just have to wait and find out...
DeleteNow you both are making me curious... what was the part that was too crazy to include??
ReplyDeleteI agree with Josie, what was the crazy part?
DeleteHmmm...Faith, do you think we should tell them :)
ReplyDeleteI suppose... :D Alright, here is the extra part: Joy doesn't think God actually hears her. Her prayers are just wistful wishes whispered to the wind...but then God literally shakes her entire world. The ground beneath her feet trembles and splits with a groan, opening wide its mouth to swallow her whole. A lost, dark underworld embraces her flailing form. There the descendants of the long gone Dathan and Abiram bestow a less than friendly welcome. (See Numbers 16)
DeleteWow, that would have been really interesting! =P
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