I thought I would actually have time for regular posting once the summer started... Haha, I've been pretty busy with my new job. When I do have time, I have no desire to write because my job is actually writing kids curriculum (and teaching it) for my home church. Anyway, I would just like to apologize for not writing and finishing so many stories I had planned for this blog. I probably won't have time to regularly keep this blog up in the future either. There just comes a time in a person's life when other things demand your attention, and I know many of us have hit the same crossroads. Don't misunderstand me. This isn't goodbye. It's just an "I'll see you later" - when time and circumstance allow.
Until then...
Have a wonderful summer! Use it for the glory of Jesus Christ!
Blessings,
Grace
Friday, June 26, 2015
Monday, April 27, 2015
The Story Eater
I finally wrote a story that I am able to post on here! This story is unique for two reasons.
1. It's short! No posting "Part 1", "Part 2". etc.
2. It's a children's story. For those of you who just started following this blog: I don't write children's stories. That is my sister's forte.
So without further delay I present to you:
The Story Eater
Once upon a time there was an old woman
who was known in her village for telling stories. One night just as she was getting ready for bed when she heard a knock on her door.
“Spinner Emily.” The village
parents begged. “Tell us a story so that we can go home and tell
our children. None of us can remember a single tale and our babies
can't sleep without them!”
Spinner Emily invited everyone into her
small house and sat down in her rocking chair. She began rocking back
and forth. Her face looked sad and she chewed on her bottom lip.
“Folks,” she finally said.
“Something must have happened to the scrolls up in story cave. I
can't remember any tales either."
Everyone began to talk and gasp among
themselves. What could have happened to all of the stories? And who
would go up there on such a dark night to check on them?
“I will go.” Spinner Emily offered.
“I will go see what has happened to them. After all, they belonged
to me before they belonged to the rest of the village.”
Many of the men felt bad inside but not
one offered to go with her. Who knew what could be up on the mountain
or even in the story cave? It was too dark to see and they were all
afraid.
Spinner Emily wrapped a warm blanket
around her shoulders, took a stick to help her climb the mountain,
and set off.
It was a long journey and there was
only a small sliver of moon to help her see. Spinner Emily tripped
many times but finally she came near the story cave.
A deep groan floated down to her ears.
And then a moan and a loud wail.
“Oh my,” Spinner Emily thought.
“Someone is in trouble. But their voice is so big! They must be
very big too. Surely,” her heart began to beat harder. “Surely it
is not a giant!”
Giant or not the brave lady trudged
forward. Peeping carefully into the cave she saw nothing but
darkness. Then there was a flash of fire and a deafening howl.
“A dragon!” Spinner Emily gasped in
surprise and nearly left then and there. But the dragon seemed in
pain and his wails made her think of the village children all waiting
for their story before they could go to sleep.
(As I have said before, I don't consider myself an artist. Mostly because drawing does not come easily for me. This dragon gave me fits!) |
So, gathering her courage she walked
right into the cave. “Mister Dragon.” She yelled hoping to make
her voice sound large. “What is the matter?”
“It's too much!” groaned the
dragon. “There are too many!”
“Too many what?” Spinner Emily
shouted and stepped further into the cave.
“The stories! There are too many!”
The dragon whined.
“Our stories!”Spinner Emily
whispered to herself. “He ate our stories!”
“Yes!” The dragon answered.
(Spinner Emily had forgotten how very good hearing dragons have.) “I
ate the scrolls. But I wish I hadn't! They tumble all over my head
and won't let me sleep!”
“Oh Mister Dragon!” Spinner Emily
said. “Dragon's don't do well with stories didn't you know that?”
“I do now!” the dragon moaned and
threw himself down on the floor.
“You must get them back out!”
Spinner Emily was beginning to feel sorry for the huge fellow.
“How?” snarled the dragon. “They
burn as I swallow them. They would be nothing but ashes in my
stomach. I can't just cough them up.”
“I don't know. Let me think about it
for a little while.” Spinner Emily said and sat down in the mouth
of the cave.
So they sat, and they sat. And poor
Spinner Emily could hardly think of a way to help the dragon because
she was feeling badly for all the village children he couldn't go to
sleep. Finally dawn came and then sun shown brightly in the cave
lighting up the dragon's purple scales. Spinner Emily saw something
then that gave her an idea.
“Oh Mister Dragon.” She said. The
dragon looked her with his big yellow eyes and she felt her stomach
flip flop. He could eat her in two bites. “I have an idea. Your
powerful claws scratch very well into this rock. If you sat here in
the cave and carved all of the stories into the walls, they would be
out of your head and you would feel much better!”
The dragon laid a claw in his stomach
and rolled onto his back for a few minutes. “Yes!” He finally
said. “I think I will try it.”
So he began scratching and scraping and
Spinner Emily watched closely as the stories were written on the
walls. As each letter and word were written she remembered more and
soon began to get quite excited. Finally the dragon finished and with
a big sigh he turned towards Spinner Emily.
“After this I will stick to eating
sheep and cows! No more stories for me.” Then he crawled to the
mouth of the cave, flew away and never came back.
Spinner Emily went back to her village.
The village parents could now remember the stories and soon all of
the very tired children were asleep. Spinner Emily was praised for
rescuing the stories and for getting the dragon to carve them on the
cave wall, where they could never again be eaten or stolen.
The End
So...What do you think?
Thursday, April 23, 2015
Title Challenge #2
One of our readers requested another title challenge. Since I am not currently writing anything that I can post on here I decided I would go ahead and grant her request.
So here's the game. You see the below picture? If that was the cover of a book, what would the title be? Give us your answers below!
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Saturday, April 4, 2015
Drifter - Part 3
Luke
rose early the next morning. The summer sun was barely peeking over
the trees, and little light spilled through the single window in the
loft. Luke glanced over at the makeshift bed they had crammed into the
corner. Timothy's form was still and his breathing sounded regular. Luke pulled on his trousers and lowered himself down the
ladder. Mama was already kneading bread at the table. She looked up
when Luke approached. “Where are you going so early this morning?”
“Just
for a little walk. I'll be back before breakfast.” Luke kissed her
cheek.
Mama
smiled. “You should meander over to that plot of land your father
was talking about last night. There's a pretty little
spot on the east side that would be perfect for a large
house. I hear the owner wants quite a price for it, but with the King's
gold, you should have a fair chance in getting it.”
“Mama
… I don't think I'm quite ready …” Luke could feel his face
burning.
“Oh
please, Luke, I raised you! I've watched you grow up strong and learn
to work with your hands. You are more ready than your Father was when
he married me. Why, we hardly had a scrap of food to call our own.
Lived on the back of my Papa's farm until Richard could secure a place
to call his own.” Mama stroked Luke's cheek. “You've got that man
look in your eyes. You can do anything you set your mind to do.”
Luke
looked away. “I will take a look at it.”
Mama
almost squealed and wrapped him in a hug. “Oh, sorry. I just got
flour all over your shirt.” She pulled away, her eyes teary.
Luke
dusted off his torso. “Don't worry about it, Mama.” He tried to
laugh, grateful for the change of subject.
“But I
am worried.” Her eyes were still teary. “Worried I'm not going to
get my grandsons soon.”
“Oh,
Mama.” Luke tried not to groan. “You've got Timothy to worry
about now.”
She
turned back to kneading her bread and her face clouded. “Well, he's
hardly a child, and not my own at that.”
“But
he is kin,” Luke added.
Mama
didn't respond.
“I
guess I'm going now.” Luke started for the door.
His
mother forced a smile. “Enjoy your walk.”
“I
will.” Luke stepped outside and took a deep breath. If she knew
what he was really doing would she approve? Luke didn't know, but it
didn't matter. He had to see if there was any sign the boy had lived.
Luke
made his way to the river bank. If he had time on they way back he'd
take the long way and stop at plot of land to make good on his word to
his mother. He followed the bank for quite a ways, avoiding people if
at all possible. He didn't need anyone to tell his Mom he'd been the
opposite direction of the Barry's plot. He was just about there. The
mouth of the river was just ahead. Luke scanned the trees, his ears were alert for any movement. There,
footprints in the mud. Granted, they could belong to someone else,
but they were small and made by bare feet. He followed them until
they disappeared into the shrubbery and trees. Now which way?
Thwack!
Something hard whacked Luke in the back of the head. “Hey!” Luke
spun around.
A
scrawny young man with a sandy head of curls and sparkling brown eyes stood
over him bearing crude wooden sparring sword.
“Jon
Fire! What in all of Amoz are you doing here?” Luke rubbed his
head.
Jon
grinned and swung his sword at the air. “I was looking for you.”
“But
how did you get here? I thought you were still working off your
father's debts in the Quartzland mines!”
“I was
… Until I ran away.” Jon grinned again.
Luke shook his head. "H-how? Where's Julie? Is she here?” He squeezed Jon's shoulder.
“She's
here,” Jon smirked. He seemed to catch Luke's drift. “After
escaping the mines, I went in search of her mistress and rescued her
from that terrifying lady. Soon thereafter we convinced a
captain to smuggle us across the Swiftish river in his ferry. Upon
arriving on your shores, I left my fair sister with the dazzling
Amelia Lamb and was headed to your house when I ran across you, your
eyes fixated on the ground and your mind lost in who-knows-where.”
Luke
laughed but guilt prodded his gut when Jon mention Amelia. Right. He
was betrothed. He couldn't be interested in anyone else.
“What
were you doing, anyway?” Jon asked.
Luke shrugged his shoulders. “I just dropped
something.”
“What
was it?” Jon was already scanning the ground.
“Oh,
don't worry about it. It's not that important. Why don't you come eat
breakfast with my family?” Luke gripped his friend's shoulder. “You
know my Mama makes the best pancakes.”
“That
she does.” Luke could hear Jon's stomach growl. “But I already
promised Queen Amelia I'd eat breakfast with them.”
“Oh …”
Luke scratched his head. He'd forgotten Jon's crush on Amelia, or
Dazzling Queen Amelia as he used to call her when they'd play knights
and queens by the river. He'd joked about marrying her, but surely he
wasn't thinking seriously now. But maybe he was.
“Why
don't you come too?” Jon slapped Luke's back. “It would be like
an old family reunion. You and me and Julie and Amelia - everything
like it used to be.”
“I
wish … but I don't think that is a good idea.”
“Why
not?”
“I
told Mama I'd be back for breakfast and promised to check out a plot
of land I may possibly buy.”
“That's
no problem. We'll just stop by your house and tell your Mama you've
had a change of plans and that you'll stop buy that plot of land on
the -” Jon's words trailed off. “Wait, why are you buying land?”
He leaned forward, a sparkle in his eye. “Is there something you
are not telling me?”
Luke's
cheeks flamed red and he looked away.
“Come
on, don't be a sissy! You're getting married, aren't you?” Jon
slapped his back.
“Congratulations, my friend! Who's the lucky
girl?”
“Wait,
wait, wait.” Luke held up his hands. “I'm not getting married
yet. My parents just want me to prepare.”
“You're
still getting married then. Again, congratulations!” Jon was
suddenly shaking Luke's hand. Then he grabbed his arm and began to
pull him into a dance. At the top of his lungs he began to sing: “Oh
the time it comes for every man when he a pretty gal will wed, and
then the lads will sing and dance because Oh the time it comes for
every man …” Jon stopped when he saw Luke wasn't dancing. “Oh
come on, Luke! Have you grown old while I was gone? Lost your feet,
maybe?”
Luke
shook his head. “Jon … please.” Leaves rustled and a bush
trembled. Luke slapped Jon's arm. “Did you see something?”
“No …
Did you?” Jon creased his brow.
Luke
peered into the shadows. A set of blue eyes met his.
“So
you are alive!” He exclaimed more to himself than the boy.
“What?”
Jon asked.
“Oh
nothing. Must have been my imagination.”
Jon
narrowed his eyes. “Well, in that case, what are we waiting for?”
“Nothing.
Nothing at all.” Luke smiled to himself and followed Jon back through the trees.
Saturday, March 28, 2015
Drifter - Part 2
The
coins in Luke's pocket jingled in his pocket with every step. He
followed the path that twisted through the trees to the small
clearing where a large cabin sat nestled in the brush. Luke whistled
a hearty sailor's tune and his feet were lighter with every step, but
even as he drew closer to his home, he kept an eye scanning the
surrounding trees.
“Luke
is home!” a voice squealed. Daisy flew out the front door, her mop
of curls flying out behind her. Luke embraced his little sister,
perhaps the only person who made coming home worthwhile. “Guess
what?” Daisy's eyes danced with excitement. “Mama says you have
to share your room for awhile.”
“What
do you mean?” Luke playfully poked her freckled nose.
“There's
a boy, and he's come to stay with us!”
“It's
true.” Luke looked up to see Amelia standing just behind Daisy.
“Your Father brought him in just a few minutes ago.”
Luke
stared at her, speechless. They had captured the Drifters early this
afternoon. Could it be? The boy had made it to land?
“Well,
what are you waiting for? I'll introduce him to you.” Daisy skipped
ahead of them.
Amelia
walked beside Luke. She linked her arm with his, despite the fact he
hadn't offered it yet. A soft rosy smell drifted from her clothes,
and it was just then that Luke noticed Amelia was wearing the hair
pin he'd given her for her birthday. Well, in all honesty, it was his
mother who had given the pin to him to give to her.
“Your
mother invited me to dinner tonight.” Amelia's voice was sing-songy
and expectant.
But Luke
didn't know what to say. “That's nice.” He tried to sound
sincere. She'd eaten with them last time he'd been home. And the time
before last.
“That's
nice? That's it?” Amelia stopped and swiveled around to face him, a
teasing grin on her face.
“I thought you'd be excited to see me
after your long day at sea.”
Luke
smiled, but said nothing. He didn't like this, her continual fishing
for affection and appreciation. He liked the old Amelia better. The
one who used to punch his belly and yank his hair and climb trees
with him. But she'd changed ever since that day their parents had
announced they had planned since their births for them to marry
someday.
Luke
sighed, and Amelia frowned. “Is something wrong?” She back into
step beside him.
“No,
just a long day at work.” Luke avoided her gaze.
Amelia
was eying him closely. “Was it really so bad? What's this?” She
snatched the bulging satchel out of Luke's pocket. She stopped and
spilled part of the contents into her palm. Her eyes widened at the
glistening gold. “Luke, this is King's gold! What in all Amoz did
you do to earn this?”
Luke
grinned, but his words were cut off by Daisy's voice. “Luke, hurry
up!”
“I'll
tell you over supper.” Luke bent over and kissed her forehead
before darting through the doorway.
It took
a moment for Luke's eyes to adjust to the dim interior. Amelia
stepped in behind him, the satchel still in hand. Papa sat with his
arms crossed, scowling at the opposite wall. He stood when he saw
Luke and Amelia enter. Luke's elder sister Leah was placing dishes on
the table, while Mama stood beside the table, her hands resting on a
boy's shoulders. Luke frowned. This boy was definitely not the one
he'd let escape off the ship. Sandy hair fell to the boy's chin, and
his dark eyes surveyed Luke's muscular sailor build.
Daisy
grabbed Luke's hand. “Timothy, this is my brother Luke. Luke this
is Timothy. His parents died so he's going to live with us now.”
Timothy
stood and extended his hand. Luke shook it. An awkward silence fell
across the room.
Mama
cleared her throat. “Luke, why don't you show Timothy your room?”
Luke
nodded and motioned for Timothy to follow. He led the boy to the
other side of the room and pulled down the ladder to the loft. Luke
scrambled up, still trying to swallow his disappointment. How on
earth was he going to share the little loft anyways?
“Well,
this is it,” Luke said when Timothy had made it over the top. “It's
small, but we'll figure out how to make room for another cot and your
things.”
“I
don't have any things,” Timothy mumbled.
Luke
glanced at him, waiting for an explanation. When none came, he
cleared his throat. “How come?”
“They
took it all.”
“Who?”
Timothy
opened his mouth to say something, but Papa's voice yelled from the
bottom of the ladder. “Luke, I need to have a word with you.”
“Yes,
Sir,” Luke replied. He glanced back at Timothy but the boy turned
away. Oh well, he'd find out later.
Papa had
pulled Luke outside to the back of the house. A dark shadow seemed to
hang over his mood, and Luke could tell this was serious.
“Does
this have to do with Timothy?” Luke asked.
“It
has everything to do with Timothy.” Papa stroked his beard, as if
trying to figure out how to word the news. “Timothy is my sister
Sylvia's son.”
“Wait.
You mean Sylvia and John? The ones who are Drifters?”
“Hush,
not so loud,” his father put a finger to his lips and glanced
around. “Yes, the Drifters.” He lowered his voice to a whisper.
“Then
Timothy is our cousin?”
Papa
nodded his head.
Luke
shook his head in disbelief. “Does Daisy know this?”
“No,
and you are not to tell her. All she must believe is that his parents
are dead and we are doing a kind deed by taking him in.”
“Then
Sylvia and John aren't dead?”
Papa
shook his head. “But you cannot let Timothy know this. My sister
and her husband were arrested in Portland and transferred to the
Heartland dungeon. Their stay will not be short. It may end with
their execution.”
“Then
why are you doing this? Isn't it dangerous? What if Timothy causes
trouble?”
“Years
ago, I made a promise to my sister that if anything ever happened to
her, I would take in her children.” His father paused and sighed.
“Yesterday a strange fellow met me in the fields with a message
from Sylvia, saying they had been caught and that her son was hiding
with friends. She thought he would be safer with me here. So, I
packed up this morning and headed to Portland to bring him home. If
the boy believes his parents are dead, then perhaps all his ties to
the Drifters will be more easily broken. If he causes trouble …”
Papa's voice faded. “Luke, I need you to keep a careful watch on
him whenever you are home. Your mother and Leah will keep an eye on
him when you are gone.”
Luke
nodded. His heart pounded.
“If he
starts saying anything suspicious or stirring up any trouble, tell me
immediately. If it weren't for my promise, I wouldn't have chosen to
put you in this sort of danger.” Papa squeezed Luke's shoulder. “I
am proud of you. You've proven yourself a noble young man thus far.
Don't fail me now.”
Luke
leaned against the cabin and watched as his father disappeared around
the house. What sort of promise could be so important as to risk
their lives? But then again, it wasn't much different than what he'd
done this afternoon. Luke's eyes clouded over, deep in thought, until
his Father popped back around the corner.
“Remember,
Luke. You have a job to do.”
Saturday, March 21, 2015
Drifter - Part 1
Here's a sneak peek at something I've worked on a bit the last few months. I may post a bit more, but most definitely not the whole thing. I need some help with this first scene though. If you have any suggestions on how to make it more realistic and accurate (I don't know much about ships), it would be much appreciated.
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When Luke had joined the apprenticeship of Captain Dye's merchant crew, he had never expected to take part in a battle. Sure, he'd been hoping for some excitement beyond dragging shipments on and off the ship, but this was different. This wasn't a Sunsdownian pirate ship or a Golden Sands barge. No, this was a King-ordered destruction of a private fishing boat which had annoyingly placed itself at the mouth of the Swiftish River.
A grizzly hand squeezed Luke's shoulder. “There she is,” Captain Dye said, his voice hushed. The fishing boat rocked on greenish waves where the water faded from murky brown to glassy blue as it spilled into the sea.
“Sir?” Luke looked up at his father's friend. “Have you ever seized a ship before?”
Dye grinned. “No, but there's always a first time, eh?” He thumped Luke's back. “Besides, this will be like stealing sweet things from a baby. They won't be expecting foul play from a merchant ship with only a few hands.”
Luke nodded, excitement swelling in his chest.
“Take the Drifters prisoners. Burn the cargo and the ship,” Dye barked at his crew.
The sailors scampered to their stations. To Luke's right, a man swung his grappling hook in readiness. Luke fiddled with the dagger at his waste as the distance between the two vessels closed. He could see people, at least a dozen, moving about on the boat. Peace lovers they called themselves. Luke wanted to snort every time he heard that reference. If anyone disturbed the peace of Amoz more, it was the Drifters.
Then they were upon them. The grappling hooks zipped through the air and landed with a mighty thuds in the unsuspecting ship. Adrenaline raced through Luke's veins. This was it. This was real. As the ropes drew the two ships together, Luke leaped over the side and onto the other deck. The boats thumped together, throwing him to his stomach. Luke pushed himself to his feet. People scattered. A balding man ran for the side, but Luke was faster. He grabbed the man's collar and shoved his dagger under his chin. “You are coming with us,” Luke grunted, dragging the man toward the boarding plank. A plank cracked against Luke's head. His knife clattered to the deck, and the old man stumbled toward the side again. Black crawled into Luke's vision. He ran his hands across the planks, searching for his weapon. A hand jerked him to his feet. “Slow down there, young man. You've got to wait for the rest of us.” Captain Dye shoved the knife back into his hands. Sailors now turned pirates swarmed the deck. Shouts pierced the air.
Captain Dye prodded Luke toward the other ship. “Go! Open the hatch. We'll stuff the prisoners in the hold with the cargo.”
Luke pounded up the boarding plank and rushed to the hatch. Sweat beaded on his brow. He could see flames shooting up from the fishing boat already. The last of the Drifters were being dragged aboard the Purple Knight. The hatch stood open, it's yawning mouth ready to receive it's extra cargo. Luke's superiors prodded protesting men into the dark hold below.
“You have no right!” A bearded man struggled against his bonds. “And neither does the King! We will not be his slaves nor will we let him corrupt our land with your merchandise.”
Captain Dye's eyes turned steely gray. He grabbed the man's beard. “Do you think I have a choice, Drifter? It's lice like you who want to keep families like mine from making a living in this world.” With a shove, Dye sent the man tumbling down the steps.
Luke smirked and shook his head. He examined the rest of the prisoners. Three more men were already being pushed toward the hatch, and a couple women huddled near the barrels as if hoping they were invisible. Not a chance. They were soon prodded too their feet.
The blazing ship faded in the distance, but Luke could still see the smoke. A sense of satisfaction swelled in his chest. Yes, he'd finally been a part of a great feat for his country. His father would be proud, and Amelia, well, she'd probably get that serious, worried look in her eyes. He could already hear here voice in his head. “You know, Luke, you could have been killed. How are we going to raise a family if you are dead?”
Luke chuckled. He liked it when she got all upset like that. Perhaps it wasn't so good for their future marriage, but he couldn't let this arranged marriage ruin his life could he? She would learn he needed his fun.
Luke jerked himself from his uneasy thoughts when a slight movement behind a crate caught his eye. He stepped closer, his hand on his dagger. Then he spotted him, hidden among the tackle, a raven-haired, blue-eyed boy with a look of sheer terror on his face. His mouth was gagged and his hands and feet were bound. His eyes widened when he spotted Luke, and he tried to wiggle farther away.
Luke's heart softened. The boy had to be only eleven or twelve. Really it probably wasn't the boy's fault he was here now, bound and gagged. His parents had probably dragged him along, teaching him against the king like the Drifters always taught their children. And then those wide eyes, they had sparked a hidden memory, something way down deep inside. He couldn't put a finger on it, but he knew he couldn't lock this boy up in the hold with the rest of them. How would he hide him? How could he get him off the ship? No matter, he'd figure out something. He crouched down and whispered, “Don't worry. I'm not going to hurt you.” He unsheathed his knife and cut the boy's bonds. Then he removed his gag and motioned for him to be silent.
The boy nodded, but he narrowed his eyes.
“I think I can smuggle you out in a crate or something. Just wait here until I tell you.”
The boy nodded again.
“Luke, I need you in my cabin!” Captain Dye's voice roared above the hustle of the sailors.
Luke motioned for the boy to stay. “Remember, don't move.” He crawled out from behind the crate and stood. “Aye, Captain, I'm on my way!” he shouted. Luke had just reached the cabin door when a splash hit the water.
“Man overboard!” a sailor yelled. “A prisoner's escaped.”
Luke's hands grew clammy. Captain Dye rushed out of his cabin. “What!? Who in all Amoz let that boy go? I didn't hire lazy bums for sailors, did I? Don't just stand there! Lower a boat.”
The man to Luke's right jumped to do the captain's bidding, but Luke didn't budge. “C-captain, he seems just to be a child. He'll probably drown by the time he reaches the shore,” Luke stammered.
Captain Dye grunted. Sailors were already lowering the lifeboat.
“Let him go,” Captain Dye huffed. “But don't tell of this to anyone.”
Thursday, February 19, 2015
The Forgotten Memory --part 3
The next morning at breakfast Fern
seemed a little unsure of herself.
“Is something troubling you Fern?”
Mistress Chervil spooned a large helping of oatmeal onto Fern's
plate.
Fern stirred the oats for a moment and
then set down her spoon. “I should not be here any more.”
Mistress Chervil and I both starred at
her.
“I mean, you have both been more than
kind to me but now I am well and I do not want to cause you any more
trouble.”
“You are no trouble.” we both
answered.
“But I am. You have to buy food for
me, Valerian, you have to share your room, and I am still wearing one
of your dresses.”
“You may not leave. Valerian and I
both enjoy you. If you truly feel badly about staying here, you may
help more with chores. Besides that, where would you go?”
Fern sighed. “I
was afraid you would say that. But I would find a way to support
myself. Maybe I could become a servant in one of the big cities.”
“No, I agree with
Mistress.” I chimed in. “You're not going anywhere.”
“I thank you.”
Fern put a spoonful of porridge in her mouth.
Fern--the only one of my character drawings I actually liked! |
Fern did start
helping with the chores more. She would do everything Mistress
Chervil or I allowed and somethings we didn't allow. One of her
favorite tasks was herb collecting. She loved gathering the green
foliage, or digging for roots.
One day a rare
thing happened, Fern was late for lunch.
“I sent her to
gather lovage, near the pond about an hour ago.” Mistress Chervil
paced the room. “I know she loves that pond so maybe she just got
distracted. Will you go check on her?”
I grabbed my straw
hat and danced out the door. It was a sunny day, the type I could eat
for dinner and I wouldn't blame Fern if she did forget about the
time.
When I neared the
pond I slowed down and approached on tiptoe, curious to see what my
friend was up to. Hearing a little splash my heart lept into my
chest. What if she had fallen in the pond and drowned?
Then I saw her
bending over the smooth surface and singing quietly to herself.
They jump, they dive,
They swim in three's or
five.
Who knows where they
come from,
I surely wish I did.
Blue and green,
Yet truly, really,
grey.
Will you come,
in,
Come playing in the
bay?
It was
not a tune I had ever heard before.
I told
Mistress Chervil about it that afternoon as we walked to town,
leaving Fern at home resting.
She
looked at me quizzically for a moment. “That, my dear, is a marine
song. I heard it once when I traveled to Crenate City. It is about a
big fish they call a dolphin.”
“What
is a marine song?” I shifted the basket full of herbs for trading
from my left arm to my right.
“It
means it has to do with the ocean.”
Something
in my mind clicked. “So she's from somewhere near the ocean! That's
why she looks so different. And her eyes, I always thought they
looked like puddles of sea water!”
“Maybe.”
my mistress conceded. “But the ocean people are a long ways off.
Don't forget your geography Val. They are on one side of Eindelliar
and we are on the other, butted against the Uncharted Lands. Over
four hundred miles.”
Despite
her voiced misgivings something in her tone made me think that
thought had previously crossed her mind.
Suddenly
I stopped and grabbed Mistress Chervil's arm. “It also means she
remembers something from her past does it not?”
“Something.”
Mistress Chervil agreed.
So the
months slipped by and Spring bloomed into Summer. Fern and I walked
barefoot together and dangled our feet in the pond to cool off. I
never told her I had over heard the song, somehow it felt like
invading her privacy.
I will
never forget the day they came. Two men, in full armor and
draped in blue rode into Darag Village. They stopped at the tavern
where they happened to come across Elder Maple on her current pet
subject: Fern.
“A
girl with piercing blue eyes?” they asked.
“Yes!”
agreed another villager who had seen Fern many times. “Like yours,
only much deeper and darker.”
“You
say she lives with the healer? Mayhap we should go visit this mind
reader.”
I heard
them riding towards us from a mile away. Who couldn't with all the
jangling?
“Mistress!”
I called. “Two soldiers in blue. They have light hair.” Then as
an after thought, “Like Fern's.”
Mistress
Chervil came and peered over my shoulder.
“Ho
there! We hear you have a mind reader!” The taller one called at
they came trotting up the hill.
“No.”
my mistress's eyebrows lowered. “We do not.”
“That
is what they said down at the pub.” The man waved his arm back
towards the Darag.
“We
have a girl here yes. But she cannot read her own mind much less
anyone else's.”
That was
not strictly true, Fern did seem to be a little less confused these
days. Mistress and I however, both knew why she was saying that.
Someone had obviously wanted Fern dead. Someone who was probably a
countryman of Fern's like these two were. If these men were in anyway
connected with her and had evil intentions perhaps, if they thought
she was out of her mind they would decide she was not a threat and
leave her alone.
“Can
not read her own mind?” the second man asked with a slight lilt in
his speech.
“That
is right.”they were at the bottom of our porch steps now and
dismounting. “She cannot remember anything.”
“Even
things we told her yesterday.” I added.
Their
eyes flickered to me.
“Well,
then I guess it was a dry run mate.” the man with a lilt began
remounting. “Say,” he stopped suddenly, “They said she had blue
eyes. Does she also have light hair? Maybe she is a country woman!”
The
taller man grinned. “Yeah! Does she look like us? Mayhap we know
her! Would not that be nice out here in this wilderness to see one of
our own.”
Mistress
Chervil stiffened next to me. I felt her hand slip into mine for half
a moment but that was all I needed. She was my mistress, and I was
her apprentice, we understood each other.
I
stepped back inside and went into my bedroom where I had last Fern.
Fern was
not there.
The men
stormed the house regardless of Mistress Chervil's attacks. The
valiant woman even grabbed a knife and received a twisted wrist for
her efforts. Caught off guard we were totally at a loss how to defend
ourselves.
Then my
wrist was grabbed from behind and my whole right arm twisted behind
my back. It hurt.
“I can
break bones.” The man with the lilt offered me. “Where is she?”
“I do
not know.”
He
twisted harder and I grunted.
“Where
darling. Just tell us and all this pain can go away.”
“I do
not know.”
I
screamed as I felt my thumb crack.
“Stop
that!” a deep but feminine voice filled the room commanding
obedience.
We all
turned toward the sound.
Fern
stood in the doorway, the tall slender figure backed by the setting
sun. Her hair seemed to be glowing and her blue eyes looked cold and
deadly.
“Fern.”
Mistress Chervil moaned.
The man
let go of me and starred in surprise.
“Someday
when right has been wronged, I will have your heads for this.” her
voice was ringing with authority. “You may think I will not
remember your faces men, but I will. Ask your master, he will tell
you that I forget nothing. Ever.”
“Just
wait until Lord Ray gets his hands on you Cet--” the taller man
began but in a blink she was gone.
I heard
her fleeing down the porch steps and tried to stop the men but they
were after her like hounds after a fox.
A fox is
a fitting picture of Fern. She took their horses. Jumped on one and
grabbed the reigns of the other. There was no question she was a
master horse rider and the thought slipped through my mind that maybe
she could read as well.
Master
Conifer later filled me in on what followed. Fern rode their horses
into town, briefly told of what had happened at the house and then,
when Darag Village was on her side she waited.
The men
came puffing up the street but never made it past the pub. The twang
of two longbow strings was heard and both men fell, arrows through
their bodies.
Mistress
Chervil and I arrived just as they were carting the bodies away.
“I am
going now.” Fern strode toward us.
“Where?”
I asked, cradling my still unbandaged thumb.
She
smiled, a little bitterly I thought. “Anywhere I have not already
been.”
“Mistress
Chervil,”she embraced my mistress, “I thank you for your care.”
Then she
turned to me. “Valerian, I am afraid I will have to borrow your
dress a little bit long but I return the nightgown. And by the by,
you are a wonderful teacher.”
“But
you already know how to read do you not?”
“English,
Latin, Greek, and French. But you would do a good job teaching
someone who did not know.” Then she embraced me too and I felt
tears running down my face.
Turning
quickly away she mounted the stronger of the two horses, my short
dress hiking up past her knees. “I leave you this other fine horse,
Mistress Chervil.” She nodded, turned and cantered out of town.
“Fern!”
I called and ran after her.
The Land of Eindelliar. I spent several days last week learning calligraphy in order to draw this. |
She
pulled the horse up.
“You
said you remember everything do you not?” I panted, coming even
with her.
A look
of intense pain slithered across her face. “Everything.”
“What
is your name?”
She
looked toward the sun, giving it's last gasp of light. “What you do
not know, can not hurt you.”
Then she
turned her horse and galloped away into the fast falling twilight.
The End
So, what do you think? Is my writing boring? Are my drawings hideous? If you say "yes" I'll agree with you. :)
Happy Birthday Grace! I hope you enjoyed the story!
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